Chronicles of First Love

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Chapter 10 : Operation X May 20, 2008

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“Welcome back..!!”, Palak came and forwarded to shake hands with me.

“Yeah…thanks.”

My mind was already dumb. My confidence used to shaken up when I was in front of her.

So for the whole week, I lingered around Palak. She liked my company. I used to crack jokes (copied from santabanta.com) and she loved them. Although there were other ‘hotter’ girls too, but I didn’t want to look
like a playboy amongst 6 girls.

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THE ‘D’ DAY:

Finally after puffing our lungs for a week, the competition-day came. After analysing the rehearsals of other participating houses, we were damn sure that the trophy is ours this time.

And our turn came. I began to feel awkward as I reached the stage realising that I am the ‘odd man out’. And we sang the song.

Chanda Sooraj Lakho Taare
Hai jab tere hi ye saare
Kiss baat pe hoti hai fir takaraare.

It was a wonderful performance (with a little contribution from my side too). And as expected we won.

“Hurrayy…!!!” Seema exclaimed and leaped towards me. And that was the second time in my life a girl hugged me. I wished she were Palak. Nevertheless, Seema also felt nice.

Infact, if you’ve ever hugged a girl, you must have experienced 3 sorts of feelings:

1. The sweet smell of shampoo from her hairs which fall just above your nose.

2. The ecstatic perception developed by the caressing of her breasts.

3. The continuous staring and humming of the people around you and their comments on the event.

But who cares? All I knew that I was the luckiest boy of the whole school for a few seconds. Things were good for me now. Palak and I became very good friends. So the only thing of concern in my life was
my studies, because I had a board exam on my head.

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3 MONTHS LATER ~ 5th MARCH 2005

“How much you did?” Karun said. He had come to my house. After I left tuitions, he was the only person with whom I was in continuous contact.

It was the starting of 5 days ‘gap’ for the Mathematics Board Examination. There is something special about the gaps in exams. Except studying, students do everything in these days including asking
each-other if they have studied anything.

“Nothing much. Let me take a break dude.” I said.

“Thats what I am here for….to give you a break. What about going to Hot Dot??” Karun shrieked. Hot Dot was the only internet cafe in my colony and a popular venue. Karun and I had spent hours in it watching
pornos.

“Crap…Not at this time.” I replied totally uninterested.

“Hey dude, you didn’t get me. I need to download CBSE Sample Papers. And you know, I am dumb at computers.”

This was true. Karun was absolutely dumb in computers. I guess, computers were the only thing in which I was better than him.

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‘HOT DOT’ INCIDENT

{Sorry friends, I’ve deleted the rest b’coz I got it too personal. Sorry to all those who got hurt by this post. I apologise by deleting this portion.}

{rest continued in Chapter 11}

PS — Sorry for modifications. I’ll write the next post soon and will continue the story.

PS– Please keep reading.

 

18 Responses to “Chapter 10 : Operation X”

  1. parthwalunjkar Says:

    wow man!!!this is the most interesting post …… :P
    u have written it beautifully as always ….

  2. Neha Says:

    hey ashu very nice …….d flow wid which u write is as usual flawless……n i like dose 3 sort of feelings u experienced………anyways keep it up……gud job

  3. Intutius Says:

    @parth
    Thankyou for appreciating. But do check grammatical mistakes.;)

    @Neha
    Dhanyavaaad ji. :) In the whole post, u liked the 3 feelings….hahaha…

    anyways, thnx for comment.:)

  4. Sanket Says:

    Arey tune bataya nahi itne sare blogs update kar liye.
    I think you are diverting from the topic. Tu to first love pe likh raha tha.

    Fir bhi, well written. Very interesting. I will wait for the next blog.

  5. Intutius Says:

    @Sanket
    Yes dude, you are right, I am a bit distracted from the main theme. But these incidents are the part of my story.

    Thanks for enjoying it. Please keep reading.:)

  6. parthwalunjkar Says:

    uh uh …
    u have deleted some part….watever was the reason…
    the story is going good …but i hope whoever is hurt does take it in sporting manner …

  7. Ankit Says:

    Dude…I liked the original version….with the incident in the cyber cafe……..

    I suggest u publish that phir se.

    I read it, and loved it

  8. Intutius Says:

    @Parth
    Thnx for understanding it. I hope the same too.

    @Ankit
    Yeh, I had a lot of hardwork on the original version. But alas.!

    No prob., I ll surely work harder and continue the story genuinly…..and keep it still real and factual.

    Thanx for appreciating it.:) Please keep reading.;)

  9. VISH Says:

    hey himanshu, which deleted part are dese all talking about i don’t know. its all about my laziness hehehe.i found dis blog nice as always .
    well watever may be d reason of deletion its ur personal matter n we all respect ur decision n waiting for ur next blog even more rocking then d deleted part.
    keep writing

  10. Intutius Says:

    @Vish

    ohh thnx yaar…..its people like you, who really encourage.
    I ll surely try to write upto ur expectations. :)

    Pls keep reading.

  11. sanjeet Says:

    hey dude..since,i m new 2 d blogging scene,i hve surfed a great no. of blogs b4 deciding to write my own..nd i must say dat ur blog is one of the most interesting dat i hve read till now!!!!

  12. Intutius Says:

    @sanjeet
    it ll b my pleasure too to read ur blog . Pls give of the link here. Also v can reach each other if u r on orkut.:)

  13. sanjeet Says:

    @intutis
    well,b4 writing my own blog,i wud lyk 2 noe dat y r u nt proceeding wid ur chronicals???

  14. Intutius Says:

    @sanjeet
    Nice question buddy. Actually, my IIT JEE result is on head……and my mind has stopped working. I am off with ideas for a few days.

    I will surely proceed with this Chronicles may be in a week or so. :)

    Soo pls keep reading.;)

  15. Ashish Says:

    u rock man!!
    amazing!!
    u look like a perfect chetan bhagat fan..
    well read my blog…

  16. neeraj Says:

    well himanshu …the comments on this blog shows …. how interesting ..it was ….i missed it …….

    n really those three feelings were awesome ….. i felt that but haven’t analysed it as u did …. i think thats what makes u a real author …..
    i also expect ki mere bhi sapne me god aaye or mujhe suggest kare …..haa..haa.
    happy writing dude …

  17. Intutius Says:

    @Ashish
    Love you dude.. :)

    @ Neeraj
    Yeah… it was damn interesting. BUt alas, it’d offended a few people related to the story. So for the sake of greater good, I deleted it. ;)

  18. Anjaneai Says:

    hmm … bad luck for me … I missed the deleted part actually .. its been a usual trend that things that offend certain class or create controvercy and are protested are actualy quite intresting …. I want To The uncensored shud i hav used this word) version of it …. hey buddy(use of wordsto force on my friendship on u) can u please mail that part .. bcz i m sure u havnt deleted that from ur space ..!

    Anjaneai


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