Chronicles of First Love

Its for you to feel…….!!! | {Start with Chapter 1}

Epilogue July 3, 2008

Intutius @ 11:54 am

I joined a local engineering college afterwards. My both biggest dreams – Love & IIT vanished. But, I moved on. I also recovered my health very drastically with God’s grace.

I called Palak on her birthday and talked to her after months. She appeared happy and that made me so relieved.

Right now, she’s pursuing her engineering in Bhopal. Apurv and Anurag are also doing the same.

Rini is in medical field while Rupal still trying hard to establish herself in fashion world. Both are out of touch with me.

Karun, Sandeep and Akshat had taken a drop for IIT again. But alas, none of them qualified. Now they are joining other colleges to continue with their dreams. I don’t talk to Akshat for unknown reasons, but Sandeep is still a mate.

Apurv and Karun are still my best friends. Karun lives near my home and we meet almost daily, while I receive calls from Apurv every week.

None of the mentioned people ever knew about my feelings for Palak. I didn’t tell anyone.

I lost because I committed a few mistakes. Whenever you love someone, never expect anything in return. But I expected many things. When they broken up, it hurts.

I had always hated Sinha Sir and continuing to do so. I’ve heard he has left the school nowadays and I am very glad after hearing that.

Recently, I received calls from Palak for congratulating me on my IIT selection.

“We are still friends.”, she said.

I am very pleased to hear that. I know we don’t affect each other’s life now. But if anyone asks me, I can proudly say:

“I loved her and she’s still my friend.”

Hey, have you forgotton Naina? If no, I tell you she’s in Mumbai these days, doing her MBBS in one of the elite medical college of India. After shifting Raipur, she studied hard and got selected in All India PMT.

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That was all from my side. I tried hard for this story and presented my views in most honest way. I hope the things worked out. :)

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29 Responses to “Epilogue”

  1. Perx Says:

    I can’t say that u got a happy ending, but just consider it a chapter closed in the book of ur life….
    I can understand that forgetting ur first love is not all that easy, but sharing your story is also a relief…. because now someone else knows the story from ur point of view too…..
    u r absolutely right u know, we should never expect anything in return, cuz we made the choice of loving someone, they didn’t ask us to….. only thing encouraging i can say is, abhi toh ur life has just started, many chapters still to be written, so go on and have a good college life
    and, err… also remember 5. someone, many hot chicks are out there in delhi, koi na koi aur mil jaayegi ;)

  2. gari Says:

    yummieee story man..!! was nvr ntrsted in readin but ur wrk hs left me stuck to it evn more..hope to get more n more of it frm u..ur lyfz xcitin nuff…n et d end ur d winner whu proudly takes away d crown…IIT..isnt it ..!!..n man keep tryin IIT is n amazing place to give wings to ur dreams..
    chao..!!

  3. Sunayana Says:

    Very well written. Hope you write more stories :)

  4. Intutius Says:

    @Perx
    Yeah…it was a chapter of my life and I m glad it ended. You got it right, I am very much relieved after telling the story from my point of view. It feels a burden has been removed.

    Let the five point someone begin in delhi again. ;)
    Nice to get a comment frm a great writer like you.

    @Sunayana
    Well…..may be I’ll write in future. Thnx for comment.:)

  5. Ankit Says:

    Ahaan, did you meet Naina in Mumbai ?

    ;)

  6. Prashant Says:

    Good one dude … continue with ur life :) and forget about the past ..there are so many guls to have rocking time :)

  7. Intutius Says:

    @Ankit
    We talked on phone because she was not in mumbai those days. Her holidays were going on and she was in Raipur….

    Alas! :(

    @Prashant
    Yes dude…..there are lots of good girls in this world…….and I will try to get one of them. ;)

  8. Perx Says:

    @Intutius
    Bas yaar ab tu chane k jhaad pe mat chadha. Have a good life in delhi, par keep writing, ok? never lose ur creativity, cuz it easily is, especially in a place like iit. aur koshish karna ki prof. ki ladki k bajaye kisi aur ko phasana…… ;)

  9. avtar Says:

    nice story. Keep it up.

  10. Intutius Says:

    @Perx
    Hahaha……arre chadhaa nahi raha……
    Arrey prof ki ladki ko phasaa ke chetan bhagat ne apni life kharaab kar di thi….I won’t repeat the same mistake. lolz…

    @Avtar

    Thanks mate for having the patience to read it.;)

  11. gurbani Says:

    mmm..a nice fitting end to a most exciting reading..thnks 4 such a gud reading experience..
    P.S-hope ur experiences in iit will make to another blog :-)

  12. bishwajeet Says:

    hmmmmmmm nice story
    n every story needs inspiration
    n keep writing

    n 1 more thing 4 u as a blogger try stumbleupon.com n stumble ur posts u ll get huge amount of traffic i got around 5000 for a single joke in 36 hrs

  13. Intutius Says:

    @Gurbani
    Lets c what i do in IIT…….. Although I m planning for some real blasting times. ;)
    Thnx.

    @Bishwajeet
    Yeah…..I m hearing about this stumbleupon thing from so many people. I think I should also try to use it.

    Thnx for the suggestion mate. :)

  14. ambika Says:

    not so gud but a nyc ending altogether. but there were lot of grammatical mistakes….improve upon them n keep writing. n let 5.someone begin agn 4m iit delhi….best of luk 4 ur college lyf.delhi rocks n njoy it 2 d fulest. n yes do write abt ragging in iit…pls….

  15. adrainsean Says:

    man i read that HOT INCIDENT PART But y did ya hafta remove the watt actually happened …to the private screening of movie u guys had planned..u never wrote abt it ..

    and now wateva u wrote that has been deleted too..wass up boy??

    cmon i was so much hooked up to the whole stroy y did hafta spoil it man…hey if the things are kinda personal and u posting isnt right do u mind mailing me the the ” PRIVATE MOVIE SCREENING ” incident to mah mail
    adrain.sean@yahoo.com

    Be assured i shall be sharing it with no one else.
    And yo i almost forgot congarts for ur sucess u finally got into IIT…..which one delhi..humm kudos wat stream did ya choose…

    any way do mail me ok… abt ur self and probably the story too..
    my mail again:

    adrain.sean@gmail.com

  16. Intutius Says:

    @Adrainsean
    Hmm……”Private Movie Screening”….That was the most interesting part of the story. But the persons involved objected, so I had to delete it. I haven’t written it compeletely because I was stopped in between, but since you’ve requested I ll write it as soon as possible and probably mail you or post it somewhere else. ;)

    I’ve got chemical engg. here and life’s quite good. what abt u??

  17. Ashish Says:

    A real Hollywood ending to ur series …..
    good work….keep it up

  18. Intutius Says:

    Haha…so such things happen in hollywood too……good to hear.!

  19. shivani Says:

    nice story!!..full of originality and innocencE!!..gud work da..kp writing.. :)

  20. mausam Says:

    plzz promote your blog..
    the story roxxx

  21. Intutius Says:

    @Shivani
    I guess the honest work finally is paying off..!! :)

    @Mausam
    Thnx dude…
    But didn’t get how to promote dis?

  22. “Whenever you love someone, never expect anything in return.”
    The statement is really very true.

    I stumbled upon your blog by chance… very honest attempt, in fact, one gets to relate incidents in his/her own life with many of yours.

    Keep writing :)

  23. piyush Says:

    Hi. a very nice and seemingly honest story. Looked very similar to Chetan Bhagat style in the beginning. Whatever, I liked it.
    u cud have almost converted it in a book :)

    So i guess u r in IITD? am in kgp. howz ur 1st sem treating u?

  24. Intutius Says:

    @just a person
    The statement is true but too hard to follow….one has to be really selfless for that.
    But i guess that’s what’s called true love.

    @Piyush
    Yeah…if i ll get acknowledgements from ’someone’ .. i will convert it into a book for sure. :P

    yaar life in iit is too hectic….its a sort of struggle.

  25. Rahul Says:

    hey is it the ending our ur story……make it a happy ending yaar just lyk our filmi stories ??

  26. Aayush Agarwal Says:

    hey,
    hi…ur style of writing is so lucid and straight frm heart that it feels nice to write ur posts….very nice work…keep it up!

    aayush agarwal

  27. Aayush Agarwal Says:

    oh read ur posts…srry 4 the mistake..

  28. Nishant Says:

    yaar kuch aise hi kahani meri bhi hai chalo chodo waise ur kahain wet my eyes


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